Book Review: Jazzy's Bitch by Krystol

Description from Goodreads:

Karmen Watson meets the man of her dreams a guy, named Jazzy. Blinded by love and money she is living the good life. Noticing a change in her new found love,Jazzy starts speaking in a different language, with his fist. Will Karmen make Jazzy change his ways? Or will she stay with him til death due her part.

My thoughts:

Do you see that description above? Forget about reading it because this 15 minute book has nothing to do with most of the description. When I say 15 minutes worth of reading time, I'm not exaggerating whatsoever. I know you can't expect much for $.99 (which is what I paid, but now B&N ebook price is $5.99, which is complete rip off), but give me at least an hour's worth of reading. 

This book covers less than 1 day in Karmen's life, the day she met Jazzy. She meets him on the corner, gets in a car with him, and he buys her whatever she wants, they go out to dinner, he gives her 5 grand, and get their groove on. They already decide she's his main girl even though they just met and damn near fall in love. We get the hint he's a pimp. End of story. 

So where does Jazzy's fist come into play in this book? Did Barnes and Noble rip me off and sell me an incomplete ebook because half that description isn't even this story? What a waste of time. I will not read part 2. It took me longer to write this review than it did to read this SHORT, SHORT story. Ugh.

I rate this 1 out of 5 stars.

BTW I copied and pasted the description above from Goodreads, errors and all. I understand I am not a perfect writer, but I am not trying to sell my product like these authors are either. Please invest and get an editor.